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    Betrayal

    Every good story needs twist and turns, as well as, betrayal and intrigue.  One reason, I made 3 of the major characters triplets is because one could pretend to be the other.  In this case, Thurn can pretend to be Tharn.  It is a bit cliche’d but only Galdermung catches on when he realizes his old friend is only using his left hand and Tharn was a rightie.  Contrived? maybe a little…but its context may help the reader see past the not-so-subtle reuse.

    This is a conceptual scene when Galdermung confront Thurn and the two battle.

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