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Fable started the topic Tropico in the forum Miscellaneous Art 2 years, 10 months ago
In a previous endeavor, I created a spread called Tropico. I may add some of this images here in the style I have developed. The previous style was really just a straight render with a little bit of post-work. I realized everyone does that so over the last three years I developed the look above. I love going from a render to a more ill…[Read more]
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Fable replied to the topic Droll Race in the forum Race Development 2 years, 10 months ago
As I have worked on Hon’Raa, I continued to develop the idea around the Droll and in my original concepts there were beings who had their magical essence extracted and now they are reduced to a shriveled existence. They are used as slaves by the Grimlords until they are worked to death. I will update this topic with a first concept sketch in t…[Read more]
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Fable started the topic Character Development: Grimlords in the forum Character Development 2 years, 10 months ago
There are three Grimlords in Hon’Raa. This is my first take on one of them. I am not crazy about this first concept sketch but I wanted to start conceptualizing them. She is unnamed as of now.
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Fable replied to the topic TGTC: Chapter One in the forum Tall Grow the Cedars 2 years, 10 months ago
Well yeah. Some people are just bad. As the story progresses you’ll discover more about why he is behaving so badly.
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Fable replied to the topic U'baan Race in the forum Race Development 2 years, 10 months ago
I have wrestled with what the U’baan look like and it may be that this is the final look for them. I like the hooves and may tinker with horns for some while other have none.
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Fable started the topic TGTC: Chapter One in the forum Tall Grow the Cedars 2 years, 10 months ago
Dobie Fisher ran along the overgrown road, trying to keep his balance on its pitted, uneven surface. His breathing was labored as his portly frame conspired with the panic that compelled him down the path. Sweat gushed from his whole body, changing his clothes to their darkest hue. Dobie’s blood mixed with sweat as it beaded across his…[Read more]
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Fable started the topic Character Development: Thorn in the forum Character Development 2 years, 10 months ago
Despite his prickly name, Thorn is actually not the major antagonist in the Hon’Raa Saga. He does, however, prove to be his namesake in several other ways. To use the cliche that he is the Thorn in the sides of several other characters is a little cheesy, but true just the same. Thorn is not happy with his lot in life, but his more apt to be…[Read more]
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Fable started the topic Character Development: Thurn in the forum Character Development 2 years, 10 months ago
Thurn is one of three triplet brothers who rule the three fifes of Tem. The main city of his fife is Stagbrook. Thurn is more ambitious than is other brothers in regards to being named king of Tem. He is less convinced his sister, Elsbeth, is alive and wants to move past her demise. He is open to trade with anyone and dark influences are abu…[Read more]
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Fable wrote a new post 2 years, 10 months ago
As I venture deeper into the story of Hon’Raa, I am met with the challenges of creating a compelling story that remains true to both its fantasy elements and that of erotica. Certainly fantastical worlds are […]
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If what’s written is sold to the reader as erotic, then personally it needs to give me an erection for me to give in a 5 star rating. I like it to be explicit and quickly get to the interaction. I guess that’s typical coming from a guy – smirks.
That said, the best erotic I’ve read is when I didn’t know it had erotic in it. I guess a better understanding of the story and its characters made it so.
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Men are definitely more visual and I get that drawing a scene out can actually turn people off. The balance between tension and pay-off can be tricky and I think most things intended to be erotic fall short
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Fable replied to the topic Character Development: Syvis in the forum Character Development 2 years, 10 months ago
There is no overestimating how bad Syvis and her sister are at the start of the story. She is wicked though not potentially unredeemable. She does love her sister and that love can sometimes make a being change their perceptions when it is taken away.
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Fable replied to the topic Character Development: Syvis in the forum Character Development 2 years, 10 months ago
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Fable started the topic Betrayal & Intrigue in the forum Storyline Development 2 years, 10 months ago
Every good story needs twist and turns, as well as, betrayal and intrigue. One reason, I made 3 of the major characters triplets is because one could pretend to be the other. In this case, Thurn can pretend to be Tharn. It is a bit cliche’d but only Galdermung catches on when he realizes his old friend is only using his left hand and Tharn wa…[Read more]
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Fable replied to the topic Character Development: Elsbeth in the forum Character Development 2 years, 10 months ago
After Elsbeth is rescued by Galdermung and his troop of men, they soon realize that she is not the same. She has been embued with a dragon soul and though the seer is able to help her control the beast within she is being tortured by the beast. The dragon does not like being caged and as the story unfolds we learn that Elsbeth has come to like t…[Read more]
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Fable replied to the topic Character Development: Elsbeth in the forum Character Development 2 years, 10 months ago
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Fable started the topic Character Development: Elsbeth in the forum Character Development 2 years, 10 months ago
Elsbeth is the rightful heir to the Kingdom of Tem. She starts the story of Hon’Raa as missing/lost in the Witches Woods south of Axbrid. For most, she is presumed dead, but on her return she is to take her spot as the Queen of Tem and her brothers, Tharn, Thurn and Thorn are to surrender their fifedoms back to her to rule – as her father h…[Read more]
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Fable started the topic Character Development: Galdermung in the forum Character Development 2 years, 10 months ago
Gadermung is an important character and one I have had in mind for a few years now. I devised the whole concept of Hon’Raa around this character and he was originally suppose to be written into the world of Skyrim by Bethesda Games. Galdermung will play a central role in the Tem Arc of the Hon’Raa story. He has a history with Tharn and se…[Read more]
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Fable started the topic Place Development: The Brothel in the forum Storyline Development 2 years, 10 months ago
The brothel is an important meeting place in Hon’Raa. Not only is a den of sensual delights but it can also be used to move a story along.
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Fable replied to the topic Character Development: Naria in the forum Character Development 2 years, 10 months ago
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Fable started the topic Character Development: Tharn in the forum Character Development 2 years, 10 months ago
Tharn is one of three triplet brothers that rule in the old kingdom of Tem. He is human and of the three the most righteous and good.
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Fable replied to the topic Character Development: Naria in the forum Character Development 2 years, 10 months ago
Here is another of Naria
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